Here are my reworked pieces from my first visual essay. The one at top is a combination of my original Redskins piece with the piece depicting the family leaving a Braves game. It is an attempt to show both the disgruntled Native American and family bonding that come through the team. The rest of the images have more compositional and color changes as mentioned in our class critique.
Your work is really coming together nicely right now. I think you are starting to discover a visual language that is pleasing to the eye and also one that you are comfortable with. Good stuff Mr. Vinson!
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