I dont have much to say that we didn't discuss in class. You were well on your way to a revision when class ended so I think we're good for now. I don't think we've talked about the color aspect yet, though. Do you plan on coloring in photoshop?
As Far a color goes i think some water color would would make this look so nice. reminds me of some illustration i have seen in a children book when i think of it with water color.